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Character profile: Vivian Sakui

Post by Vivian Sakui on Sat Feb 02, 2013 5:27 am

Age : 17. DOB. Month: 5, Day: 13, Year: 2002
Class : Senior
Appearance : Vivian Sakui is a fairly average girl, 5ft 9inches, weighs about 120 pounds or 1920 ounces, her body build is quite... Average.
Vivian has long, silk-like pink hair, with a single curl in front of her face that covers her right eye. Her eyes are green as emeralds. Vivian has pale white skin, and bags under her eyes due to lack of sleep.
Vivian wears the normal/standard Yamaku clothes on a school day, but when she has a day off or on weekends she wears black Gothic clothes with a pink and white striped witch hat.

Personality :Vivian is somewhat normal in a group, normally doesn't like to interact with more then one person at a time. Due to her lack of hearing and not being able to speak fluently, Yet if she were to "speak" to someone one on one the other person will realize that she's pretty... insane, due to her delusions about being able to see a different world then other people can see. And how she's pretty convinced how she's a "witch". Vivian normally likes to express herself in a form of art, it's mostly paintings but a sculpture or two will pop up occasionally.

Back story : Vivian Sakui was neglected her entire life, not even her parents would accept her for who she is, due to the delusions she had since she was seven. She was basically left to rot in her own room, the teachers would even avoid calling on her to answer a simple question. At the age of 13 she lost her hearing, since she never talked much before, she took an oath of silence, leaving her basically a mute. She can read lips due to people constant whispers about her in middle school. She prefers to sign then to read lips though, cause sometimes she can misinterpret what people tell her. At the age of sixteen her parents decided to make her go to Yamaku High so they can basically avoid dealing with her insane rambling, well jesters of hands.
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Re: Character profile: Vivian Sakui

Post by NorXTNP on Sat Feb 02, 2013 5:30 am

Can you provide a picture? (optional)
Also what is her exact age?

If you can clear me up, ill give you a yes. But please make it a little clearer or better to overlook, the best way to do that is using our template, it could be a nyereason.

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Re: Character profile: Vivian Sakui

Post by Raiden on Sat Feb 02, 2013 5:35 am

First of all - please read all the stickies and use the template we have provided there. Second - your backstory literally makes no sense. Please write in third person and try to describe objectively what your character's life has been up to this point. Third - put a picture of her as your avatar. After that's done, if everything else is still in order, I'll approve her. And a non-mandatory side note - you might want to include the fact that she can learned to read lips in her backstory, because otherwise communication with the other characters is gonna be pretty difficult.

Oh, and also - post a response when everything's done so we can see you've updated it.
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Re: Character profile: Vivian Sakui

Post by LQ-84i on Sat Feb 02, 2013 5:42 am

We have a template and it should have been put to use, and the tone of the back-story seems confusing and doesn't tell me personally how or why she was put here or how her life was like before this point. You do these things and we're pretty much okay to go.

Again, I'd also like for the Template to be used, because we expect it to be used.
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Re: Character profile: Vivian Sakui

Post by Vivian Sakui on Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:14 am

Avatar : done. I had to search deep in my HHD.
Age : 17. DOB. Month: 5, Day: 13, Year... [LOL I don't know what year cat ]
Class : Senior
Appearance : Vivian Sakui is a fairly average girl, 5ft 9inches, weighs about 120 pounds or 1920 ounces, her body build is quite... Average.
Vivian has long, silk-like pink hair, with a single curl in front of her face that covers her right eye. Her eyes are green as emeralds. Vivian has pale white skin, and bags under her eyes due to lack of sleep.
Vivian wears the normal/standard Yamaku clothes on a school day, but when she has a day off or on weekends she wears black Gothic clothes with a pink and white striped witch hat.

Personality :Vivian is somewhat normal in a group, normally doesn't like to interact with more then one person at a time. Due to her lack of hearing and not being able to speak fluently, Yet if she were to "speak" to someone one on one the other person will realize that she's pretty... insane, due to her delusions about being able to see a different world then other people can see. And how she's pretty convinced how she's a "witch". Vivian normally likes to express herself in a form of art, it's mostly paintings but a sculpture or two will pop up occasionally.

Back story : Vivian Sakui was neglected her entire life, not even her parents would accept her for who she is, due to the delusions she had since she was seven. She was basically left to rot in her own room, the teachers would even avoid calling on her to answer a simple question. At the age of 13 she lost her hearing, since she never talked much before, she took an oath of silence, leaving her basically a mute. She can read lips due to people constant whispers about her in middle school. She prefers to sign then to read lips though, cause sometimes she can misinterpret what people tell her. At the age of sixteen her parents decided to make her go to Yamaku High so they can basically avoid dealing with her insane rambling, well jesters of hands.
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Re: Character profile: Vivian Sakui

Post by Raiden on Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:20 am

I edited your first post with the updated description and added a year of birth. I don't see any more problems, so... Approved.
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Re: Character profile: Vivian Sakui

Post by LQ-84i on Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:22 am

You have been approved by me here, so it's time to move this yes?
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