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[OPEN] After School Writing

Post by Asterick Kitomi on Wed Feb 06, 2013 11:41 pm

Asterick walks into the library; school is over and it's time to relax. He brings out his notebook and flips through old writings, little doodles, some very elaborate drawings, journal entries. A book of 1000 sheets and it's a little over half full. It amuses Asterick, he never used to buy the big notebooks because he's never fill them but now it seems that all uses.

He starts to write a poem, looking immersed in it with the pouring of his emotions, then someone comes up from behind-
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Post by Yuuji Takahashi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 12:53 am

Yuuji sneaks ,peeks over and speaks

"What you writing there Asterick?"
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Re: [OPEN] After School Writing

Post by Asterick Kitomi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:37 am

Is startled, "Oph! Oh, sup' Yuuji? Just this poem, have a lookey~", he hands him the notebook.

Slow motion, people running from the debriese falling down onto the city. All sound is blacked out, only a song on the piano plays. A kis stops in his tracks and stares at the sky. He notices that there's nothing to be afraid of, it's only flowers raining upon the city. A homeless lady stands up, looks to the blue sky and cries tears of joy. "Beautiful..." she murmurs to herself. Everyone is just running but the kid and the homless lady sit and enjoy what has been given to them. A buisness man, who is running from all of it glances up, he is amazed at what colors he see's. A combination of red, blue, white, pink, yellow, astounding. He stops running, puts his hands up and says "This is the chance", he s right, this explosion of a floating garden is the sign of another chance at living, he let's all the flowers rain down on him. A tear from the kid's eye falls to the ground, tears of bliss. The girl the kid likes goes next to him and grabs his hand, she smiles and so does he. The homeless lady looks to the right and seea a briefcase full of money,s eh grabs it and runs with a big grin on her complextion. The bisness man gets a call from his boss, he answers and whispers "I quit" and begins his life as a freeman. He is happy, the kid is happy, and the homeless lady goes and buys herslef a meal. That was the day they got a second chance at liing. That was the day they all came out of depression, the day they beat their mental disorders and finally won in life. Beautiful, wonderous, not blue, but red. Pink even, or just sky blue. These are the wonders of life... When we beat a challenge we face.
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Post by Yuuji Takahashi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:45 am

Yuuji takes the notebook and reads

"That was... beautiful"




[Really good!! loved it ]
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Re: [OPEN] After School Writing

Post by Asterick Kitomi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:50 am

"Thanks, man", he smiles, "I like writing",

He ponders a moment while taking back his notebook, "What music are you into?"
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Re: [OPEN] After School Writing

Post by Yuuji Takahashi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 1:58 am

Yuuji finds a seat,thinks for a moment before answering

"I love Western Metal... you?
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Post by Asterick Kitomi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:03 am

"Mostly underground western hip-hop but everything basically", he thinks, then adds "But not country, bleck". He laughs, "But I write raps, that's what most of my poems are if you look at the word flow",

"Oh! So, did ya' talk to that Nagisa girl again?"
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Re: [OPEN] After School Writing

Post by Yuuji Takahashi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:14 am

Yuuji shakes his head a bit disappointed

"Not yet I planned on going to the rooftop right after school but I have to take care of somethings. How are you faring with your crush ehhh?"

Yuuji gives a devilish grin
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Post by Asterick Kitomi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:19 am

He sighs little depression sigh, "Not so well, hasn't been at her dorm", but he perks his head up, "But I'll wait, have no given up yet!", he smiles hugely, like a child.
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Post by Yuuji Takahashi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:24 am

Yuuji places his arm around Asterick's shoulder

"That's the spirit!"

Yuuji laughs
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Post by Yuuji Takahashi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:24 am

Yuuji places his arm around Asterick's shoulder

"That's the spirit!"

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Re: [OPEN] After School Writing

Post by Asterick Kitomi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:27 am

He smiles, "Damn right, it is!", he hesitates a little but says "She actually sorta inspired a poem, in a way. Or she made me extend an older poem. I've never had a girlfriend which made this poem called Mystery Girl awhile back but then she made me add on to it, was quite weird since adding to old writing is not something I usually do. I like surfer music", Asterick's mind can never stay on one subject.
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Re: [OPEN] After School Writing

Post by Yuuji Takahashi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:39 am

YUuji looks at Asterick a bit confused

"Ummmm... Asterick before we go on to a different subject lets stay on poems for a second."

Yuuji's eyes widen

"Why don't you write one for her?!"
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Post by Asterick Kitomi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:45 am

"Well I would but I must get to know her better, unless it's sweet to write a poem about not knowing who someone is but still be intrigued", he smiles, "I'll show her my writing someday, when I'm sure it won't scare her away",


"Gotta be careful with such a hobby", he winks.
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Re: [OPEN] After School Writing

Post by Yuuji Takahashi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 2:58 am

Yuuji rubs his neck

"Yea your right. Guess I jumped the gun too soon hehe."

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Re: [OPEN] After School Writing

Post by Asterick Kitomi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 3:07 am

"Well I got some things to do so I'll catch you later, man",

He gets up and says; "Oh and thanks, Yuuji. Do not know why I'm saying this, but thank you",

He walks off with a wave.
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Re: [OPEN] After School Writing

Post by Yuuji Takahashi on Thu Feb 07, 2013 3:08 am

Yuuji waves back

"Later Asterick, and your welcome"
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